Commenting on the Prologue

Yeah, it's not yet on fanfiction.net because the Document Manager there wouldn't let me upload it, and the updated version of the first chapter. So I'm just posting this out of boredome and wanting to avoid studying for just a few minutes longer.

Oh, and did I mention that my iPod is glitching, again. This time it hasn't turned on, or reacted to my power switch, or being re-setted. T.T Do I need to buy a new one? Waah!